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Today:
Another figurative apple cup
Red swatches
Lines of strayed burn
A bite I’ll leave

Can you taste it?
A sort of velvet strum
Coated in off key sharps
Up and down,
Round and quiet

‘It is bitter!’
My moon,
It was always-
So

Tell me,
Has the wind never
Creased your cherry locks?
The shores never
Whispered their deaths into the sand?

Four years
And I’d have said the same
Hiroshima
Seconds and sharply, change
The world isn’t new

A particle, a mote perhaps
Says burn papers
Expel the paint
Try the fever

‘But it is hot and cold like summer rain’
Witch! Has it not come,
The white?
Truth in pearls
Today has never been.
©2006-2009 ~corollary
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inspired by sylvia plath

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:iconx-ample:
very nice! great choice of words

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:icongutterkid:
i feel like i just tripped a bit, thanks for the transfer

That lilting power is impressive

(sylvia plath is great, so is this)

if all sin is equal then so is all art

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"You young people... it's all tea and muffins and excitement in your world."
:icongutterkid:
ps. it's also beautiful

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"You young people... it's all tea and muffins and excitement in your world."
:iconjinnwoo:
well arn't you just horribly talented at everything!!!! this is beautiful really truely, wonderfully quirky also.

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:iconakutou-san:
today xixi's writing a poem
but my english sucks
and i can not appreciate what she wrote

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:iconx-ample:
you're very welcome :) my pleasure

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